12 December, 2005

warning: this post will bore most of you to tears

It occurred to me today that A.B. Paterson's 'Clancy of the Overflow' is a fine example of Modernist poetry. Most people would, of course, look at me wide-eyed, aghast that I would even suggest such a thing. But I hold firmly to this statement and go further, suggesting that this poem should take it's place alongside Yeats' 'The Lake Isle of Innisfree' and Eliot's 'The Wasteland'. Well, okay, maybe not 'The Wasteland' but at the very least 'The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock'. It may possess both rhyme and rythym but Pound advoctaed removing such things only if they hindered the musicality of the poem and in this case I, at least, do not feel that it does. And it expresses the same dissatisfaction with the 'modern' technicological and impersonal world of the bustling city and longs for a simpler and purer life in nature, and does so without losing it's uniquely Australian tone.

Yes, this is the kind of thing I idly ponder while in the midst of re-arranging my living room. Truly I am a lost cause.

Oh, and for the sake of those still reading who are unfamiliar with the poem, a gift:

Clancy of the Overflow
by Banjo Paterson

I had written him a letter which I had, for want of better
Knowledge, sent to where I met him down the Lachlan, years ago,
He was shearing when I knew him, so I sent the letter to him,
Just "on spec", addressed as follows: "Clancy, of The Overflow".

And an answer came directed in a writing unexpected,
(And I think the same was written with a thumbnail dipped in tar)
'Twas his shearing mate who wrote it, and verbatim I will quote it:
"Clancy's gone to Queensland droving, and we don't know where he are."

In my wild erratic fancy, visions come to me of Clancy
Gone a-droving "down the Cooper" where the western drovers go;
As the stock are slowly stringing, Clancy rides behind them singing,
For the drover's life has pleasures that the townsfolk never know.

And the bush hath friends to meet him, and their kindly voices greet him
In the murmur of the breezes and the river on its bars,
And he sees the vision splendid of the sunlit plains extended,
And at night the wondrous glory of the everlasting stars.

I am sitting in my dingy little office, where a stingy
Ray of sunlight struggles feebly down between the houses tall,
And the foetid air and gritty of the dusty, dirty city
Through the open window floating, spreads its foulness over all.

And in place of lowing cattle, I can hear the fiendish rattle
Of the, tramways and the buses making hurry down the street,
And the language uninviting of the gutter children fighting,
Comes fitfully and faintly through the ceaseless tramp of feet.

And the hurrying people daunt me, and their pallid faces haunt me
As they shoulder one another in their rush and nervous haste,
With their eager eyes and greedy, and their stunted forms and weedy,
For townsfolk have no time to grow; they have no time to waste.

And I somehow rather fancy that I’d like to change with Clancy,
Like to take a turn at droving where the seasons come and go,
While he faced the round eternal of the cashbook and the journal -
But I doubt he’d suit the office, Clancy, of "The Overflow".

Anyone who needs translation of any uniquely Australian terms or phrases, just ask.

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